Outside

In  this  story  I  worked  on  using  interesting  sentenceswith  joiners  and  correct capitals and full stops.

On  the  the  playground  I  can  hear  the  birds tweeting  as  the cold  icy  wind  blows  against my  face. I  can  hear  the  stones  snap while  the kids  go  running  across  the  playground. I  can  see  the  bridge  swaying  as  it makes  a  creaky  sound  like  a  broken  gate. When I  am  running  on  the concrete, I  can  see  the  chalk  drawings